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    there was a boy

    with bird bones

    he never spoke

    he stared at me until

    i fell in love with him

    woke

    up with him

    he listened to me until

    i ran away from him

    he was a little bird who

    never said a word
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~blubbityblub Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
GWEEE its so awesome and sweet and sad and ARGH IDK. I love this! You rock! :iconsuperheroglompplz:
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~Flummoxative Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Simple and yet so sweet.
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~silver-ships-fly Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
i love bird boy
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*hazeltown Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He's still around somewhere
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:iconmichi-iyo:
this is gorgeous, got absolutely lovely melody and says so much with so little words.
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*hazeltown Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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~LupusIntus Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I really love how you use the break with 'woke' on a single line and the short 'up with him' following. It really hits you when you're reading it.

Very lovely. :D :heart:
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*hazeltown Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, friend!
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